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Wicked expectations

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Inspired by The Anniversary of Wizard of Oz featuring my favorite Cosplayer Alissa alisakiss.deviantart.com/


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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Excellent colour palette, and the shading/highlights give nicely realistic depth to the scene and the figures. I'm ambivalent on the flying monkey - it sort of works, but I think the scene would be just as strong without him.

The main weakness is in the lines - the lines marking the edge of her skin are too thick, while those of the hat are too sharply cut off (alsosome ghosting of pixels around the rim), and the bed is lacking them altogether, giving it a bit of an undefined feel.

Thin, sharp lines would help contain the definition of mass that the shading gives so realistically - and would also help define the shape of the mouth and the curve of the lower back, which both look a bit rough/sketchy as is.

The hair, too, is lacking the shading/depth of the rest of the scene, which is a little jarring - try looking up a tutorial on doing realistic hair, there's plenty around the site.

You've shown plenty of skill with the shading, composition and colour here - just work a bit on containing shapes and your work will really shine.